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28 April 2011 @ 10:06 pm
fic update  

Fic update, part 2

Finished rewriting several sections which are scattered from part eleven forward.  The general sense of the story is still here; I just did some changing of Jim's injuries and causes.  Hopefully now I'll be able to move forward.

 
 
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farfeletfarfelet on April 29th, 2011 11:29 am (UTC)
Well done!
Are you going to post the modified versions before you go on writing? It would give your readers the occasion to re-read the whole thing from the beginning....
Anyway, congratulations on revising your story so quickly!
Becky: writingelisabec on April 29th, 2011 07:22 pm (UTC)
reposts
Actually, I waited to post the above message until I'd reposted the edited sections. It's why I linked part eleven since that's where the edits started. When I get the next section written/posted, I'll make an additional note, just in case.
farfeletfarfelet on April 29th, 2011 08:55 pm (UTC)
Re: reposts
Re-reading the story from the beginning, it flows nicely. And the "lighter" injuries for Jim make things even more interesting, because you mix in sentinel stuff....
Of course, now my impatience for more has woken again! ;)
Becky: writingelisabec on April 30th, 2011 04:48 am (UTC)
Re: reposts
I'm glad it still flows well. It's always worrisome to go back and change so much way after it's been written.

I have notes written out for the next several sections and I think somewhere I have further notes for the storyline in general. I just have to remember where I put them...they might actually be handwritten somewhere.